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salilusAug. 24th, 2005 06:20 pm Welcome!12 comments - Leave a comment Share Next Entry

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From:hot419fem
Date:August 25th, 2005 05:53 pm (UTC)
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He just looked at her slowly walking away, wondering if he would see her on the train
From:hot419fem
Date:August 25th, 2005 05:58 pm (UTC)
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hmm that maybe a run on, opps
From:salilus
Date:August 25th, 2005 07:01 pm (UTC)
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it looks okay to me :)